I was born in there in 1991,12,13. I was born in Oshima in Nagasaki. Oshima is an island. It is a medium size island.
Nagasaki has some fun place. There are some theme parks. For example, there are "Nagasaki Bio Park" and "House-tenboss." First, Nagasaki Bio Park is a zoo. There is a rarely zoo in Japan. We can touch some animals. For example, we can touch turtles, wallabies, capiballas, and so on. Other, we can feed for many animals which is in there. It is rare experiences. However, it is so far from Nagasaki city. We must go there by car, bus or taxi, but there is very funny place for everyone. Specially, children can feel strong happiness.
Second, House-tenboss is like Holland. There are windmills and tulips. It is beautiful. You will feel what I am in Holland now, if you go to there. In there, we can buy a "One Piece" goods. There has the largest One Piece shop in Japan. If you like One Piece, please go to there and buy them. I think you will be able to be excited and feel strong happiness.
In Nagasaki, there are things only in Nagasaki. It is streetcars. Many people who live in Nagasaki use streetcars. Streetcars is major vehicle in Nagasaki. When I was high school student, I used streetcars to go high school many time. A fee of it is cheap. Streetcars are very useful thing for people who live in Nagasaki city. Other, Many slopes are famous in Nagasaki. There were some hardships to walk on slopes. It is very hard. I don't want to walk on slopes.
Nagasaki has many good foods. I'll talk you about chanpon and sponge cakes. Chanpon is a noodle foods. Many vegetables and many sea foods is in chanpon. Sponge cakes is a Holland foods. It likes cake. Many people who live in Nagasaki sometimes eat them. They are good taste.
Nagasaki has many good things. For example, there are theme parks, foods, rarely things and so on. It is too many things to all tell you. Please come to my favorite and home town, Nagasaki. You maybe make many many good memories.
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I think Nagasaki is nice place, too.
返信削除Do you think where is the best place for tourist in Nagasaki?
I want to go House-tenboss sometime.
I understand Nagasaki is good for sightseeing and food.
I think you should separate 2nd paragraph more.
I felt that you like Nagasaki. What kind of chanpon do you like? You could express Nagasaki. But I think that you should change your title to a catchy title.
返信削除I have been there for school trip. I like chanpon very much!
返信削除Good essay!